Monday, April 27, 2009

Isla palma



My hometown is “Isla Palma”; it’s beautiful because it’s sea, sports and shows.
-Its sea is about 5 colors at 6 o’clock, and when the sun comes down … all the beach change of colors because the light has left, and it starts to become like a type of orange , yellow and red(the beach).

-Isla Palma’s typical sport is “snorkel”; it’s very nice because it consist in swimming under the water for observing all the types of fishes and marine animals that can exist in Colombia and, specially, in “Golfo De Morrosquillo”.







-Shows are very spectacular because they are very colorful , creative , and they are made with recyclable materials … the most famous Show is the one they do for New Year because that show , shows all the tradition , culture and believes they have in the Colombia’s coast.

5 comments:

  1. nice text, it misses a litle bit of coherence but its well structurated. congratulations.!!!!!

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  2. Laura Maria!!!!! I have never go to Isla Palma but with this text I want to go!!
    Your text is very colorful and nice, nevertheless, you have to redact it a litle beet better and it need more coherence because in some parts is difficult to understand.
    Good Work!

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  3. HI Lala:
    your text is nice and welll wroten, but its missing some coherfence in some sentences.
    Its seem to be a very nice place .
    bye.
    att: anama

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  4. Lala:
    Your text is very well done it`s coherent and using well capitalization and punctuation marks .. well done !! congrats !!! is one of the best you have done!

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  5. lala youre text is coherent and it have many interesting facts the division of the information is a great form of organizing information.Good Job!!!!!!

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